Person I Admire Essay

I admire a lot of people but the person I admire the most is my mother. She is the most important person in my life. There is no reason for me to live without her by my side. My mom is a church leader. She a very good leader because she work hard and give a very good advice. She cares about everyone job, but not only works also their health. She works hard every day and she likes to learn something new. She loves to go down Church at the provinces and teach Bible to the women’s. She a very given person and on the other hand people loves to call her mother hand who always cares about others and very giving. She mostly cares about other then herself.

I admire her because she is a very intelligent, good ambitious and she has many goals in her life. She takes good care of everybody also very helpful leader. She humbles herself and tries to fit into every class. She is a wonderful mother, very patient, sensitive and open hearted. Being so patient and open hearted so whenever they have trouble always comes to her for help. She is a great and fun person to hang around because she has a great sense of humor to everybody.

My mother has many talents that I don’t have, but I have two talents like her is teaching and loving kids. She a very good adviser, a good model mother. Generally, my mom is a warm and friendly. She is very patient and careful in everything. She always opens her heart listened to everyone and helps to solve. She always encourages me and makes me happy. She says my dad and me is the most important person in her life that she have to care.

She is very important to me because she have many good things that I have to learn from her. She is a good example to me and I love her for many more reasons. I admire my mom so much and I love her. She can always advice me and teach me to walk in the right path. She even teaches me the living life every day what should I do and how I have to respect to other people especially old people. When I grew up I want to be like her because she has many good examples that I should follow. Even if we were far apart from a country my heart will never close for her. I will always love’s her and she will always be my best mother number one.

THE PERSON I ADMIRE
Ever person admires someone. They are the reason we keep going on despite all the challenges and temptations. They help us go on the right way. They stand as our bones that help us stand straight. They will do everything for you.

There are many people who influence my life, but there is that one special person who showed me more than I could see in the world. That special someone is my MOM. She taught me to keep moving even though I'm close to giving up, she believes that there is always something special waiting for me; you just need to have your faith and believe in yourself. There is one time that I wanted something really bad but she said no and told me that "want" is different from "need". She told me that material things are not important we should be contented in what we have and be thankful for it. During my childhood life there are times that I hated her because she often scold me, but then I realized why she does that because it's their way of showing their love and that, it is not us that they get mad at it's what we did wrong.

(am still working on it)

This is nicely written.

There is one time that I wanted something really bad but she said no and told me that "want" is different from "need".

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Maybe you should revise the way you begin this essay, FIRST: introduce the idea of your mom being the one you admire, THEN explain all of the qualities that you describe. Be sure to focus on the qualities of your mother that you admire most, include aspects of her personality, her job, her passions and interests, then link your own self to her qualities. You are already doing these things, just trying to emphasize the best way for you to stay on track. Tell it like its a story, make your words flow. I wish you luck :)

Every person admires someone.
She taught me to keep moving even though I'm close to giving up, she believes that there is always something special waiting for me; " You just need to have your faith and believe in yourself."

During my childhood life there are times that I hated her because she would often scold me, but then I realized why she does that. I t's her way of showing her love and that, it is not me that she go t mad at, it's what I did wrong. You could also give an example of how she helped you learn from a mistake and how that ties into why you admire her so much. (am still working on it) Good so far :)



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